Scream
How long can one stand facing the cold hard wind that blows your mind and soul away? How much more can a fragile body take before breaking into pieces? How loud do I have to scream to be heard? How much can one shed of love and sweat and tears? How long am I to stand to give the illusion of steel? How much longer is this insanity to last ? It’s not fall anymore but these leaves keep falling as gently as tears leave the heart Labels: poetry
posted by Chica Bonita Q8 at 1:18 AM
13 Comments:
Ouch :/
i looooooove the last line. It hits home! :)
There's so much there
you stand for as long as u WANT to
and you stop whenever u deside its enough
issues of trust are never answered with words, only actions. no matter how long you last no one phisically lasts for ever, only words do.
if thats not an oxymoron, i dont know what is, but it some how works.
ling-bling: 'what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger'
Cixousian Panic: thanks sweetie :)
transparently: that too
eshda3wa: thanks hun, but at this point stopping is not an option, some things are beyond your control
antisocial: I agree but this isn't about trust, it's far from it
its ok if u fail once, twice or even more, but its not ok if u didnt stand up again !
=)
Oh I agree but this isn't about failure either, thanks though :)
word well said :)
Wow!! The last line is the best..Loved it!!
Stand as long as you have strength!!
glamorous & sene: thank you :)
wow!!!
nough said!
thanks :)
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